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in my head!!
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Created on 1-7-07
you cant understand what i feel
when i feel the knife cut my skin
you can never know
the sorrow in my heart
when i realize that im alone
this world is so cruel
but no one seems to notice when i disapear into my own head
it's dark and twisted in there
but it's better then being out here
cuz in my head i don't feel the cut
i don't see the scars and i don't feel alone
in my head is were i'm staying
cuz no place is better the my twisted lil head
the only place i sleep soundly in my bed
Please Login to post comments| On October 18th 2008 Beliathor Said : | |
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sorry... I just can't say this is a good poem,it would be lying on my end...
all your other work is amazing,TRY to write about the way you think,not about the way you think you exist. |
| On February 1st 2007 rndmannoyance Said : | |
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I really like this poem. It's amazing and I connect. |
| On January 14th 2007 sincerelyichab Said : | |
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nicely done, I like keeping to yourself instead of trying to be like everyone and everything else :) |
