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A Dark place |
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Pieces of My Heart |
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~Bff~ |
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A song for ma love!!
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Created on 5-7-08
V1 : TAKE ME AWAY TO A PLACE BEYOND THE STARS. PAST MERCURY AND MARS. TO A PLACE WHERE WE CAN BE HAPPY. I KNOW THAT SOUNDS SAPPY. BUT THATS JUST THE WAY IT IS. I'M TRYING TO REVEAL TH TRUTH BENEATH MY SKIN. THE LAYERS SO THIN. JUST SIT BACK AND SOAK IT ALL IN. CAN YOU BELIEVE ITS YOUR HEART IM TRYNA WIN?
CH:OPEN YOUR HEART AND LET ME IN. ITS TIME FOR ME AND YOU TO BEGIN. TO START OUR JOURNEY TOGETHER. IN SUNNY OR RAINY WEATHER. IM HERE FOR YOU AND ONLY YOU. SO OPEN YOUR HEART AND LET ME THROUGH.
V2: IM HERE FOR ONE THING YOU AND ONLY YOU. TO GIVE YOU A LOVE SO TRUE. YOU SAY YOU WANT ME, BUT I GUESS NOT ENOUGH. BUT I'LL ALWAYZ BE HERE FOR YOU WHEN THINGS GET ROUGH.THROUGH THE DARKNESS AND INTO THE LIGHT. COME TO ME DONT PUT UP A FIGHT. I WANT YOU MORE THAN YOU CAN IMAGINE. SO WHY DO YOU LEAVE ME HERE FOR MY HEART TO BE BROKEN?
V3: IMTRYING TO KEEP MY COMPOSURE, BUT WHEN IM AROUND YOU I CRACK UNDER PRESSURE. YOU MAKE ME FEEL LIKE IM ON TOP OF THE WORLD HOW COME YOU WONT BE MY HAND TO HOLD? I WISHED ON A COUPLE STARS FOR YOU. SOMETHING I DONT USUALLY DO. BUT THERES SOMETHINGS ILL ALWAYS DO FOR YOU
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It seems so naturally Not forced at all. I don't like it when poems or things that rhyme feel forced. But this flows so well. It's beautiful.