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Created on 1-6-08
I watch my life go passing by
Oh how fast time does fly
I see the one I love he most
He stands there watching me close
I feel my cheecks turn burning hot
Did I do somethin? I think not
Hurried, I run after him
He turns around with a grin
I tell him my true feelings
He watches as I spread my wings
I watch as he slowly dissappears
My face is wet, wet with tears
I open my eyes, I'm still sitting there
The lonliness I can not bare
I see nothing ahead of me
Nothing is what I let my life be
Please Login to post comments| On August 26th 2008 ScarletRegret Said : | |
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i kno how u feel. tis a gd subject to write because so many ppl can empathise with it..which makes the poem better.
i like how at the start i was convinced this was a happy poem but at the end i was convinced other wise. :)
sorry about my unimpecable spelling |
| On January 6th 2008 daniellemann Said : | |
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What do you think? Like it, and I'll more poems. If not I'll add more anyway. |
