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let it go and be free |
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thank the lords |
pushing hard
i wish i could wait for you
i really really do
but when i look in your eyes and see you dont care
how am i to be true?
maybe you do care
maybe you dont
maybe your waiting
to see if i wont
i try really hard
to push thyself through
and i almost succeeded
until i see her with you
| On December 29th 2007 jaylynn142434 Said : | |
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its pretty good. one of ur bttr 1s but u no my fave. |


