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Created: 09/08 2008
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Category: Love

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love is life?

love is life?

                                               love is life?

                                                          love is life

                                               life is love

                                     my brothers as they lay slain

                                     their blood bathing the ground

                                     the bullets of man's wrath and the bodys

                                        of the mothers that spawned them in this

                                                       world.

                                              the love they give what is this love

                                              this bloody, muddy, dissovled hope

                                                         is this love or life

                                              i wish i could follow these men in their 

                                                                                 love

                                                             but as they ended their life in love

                                                       i shall hold my gun continue life with their love

                                                                   and fight the love and life fight.

                                                      so lonng my brothers i will live my life and wait

                                                                               till

                                                              i join you in love's bossom.

 

 

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On November 28th 2008 dan4tr Said: 
dan4tr hey read this
On October 5th 2008 UnSane420 Said: 
UnSane420 this is good i like how you put so much honor in this it nice to see somebody standing up for justice i like this poem!
On September 24th 2008 Tiffiscool16 Said: 
Tiffiscool16 It's really deep and well written. Awesome work!
On September 19th 2008 mlepaige Said: 
mlepaige i really like it =]
On September 16th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 very abstract and i suspect it was created this way in part to derive multiple opinions and thoughts on it. so that everyone gets a different feeling from it yet having everyone love it. which i do.
On September 16th 2008 dan4tr Said: 
dan4tr thanks very much
On September 16th 2008 jesco09 Said: 
jesco09 love it.. and i absolutely love how its written. its very sad but understanding.
On September 13th 2008 dan4tr Said: 
dan4tr thanks
On September 12th 2008 barb2286 Said: 
barb2286 nice.really good.
On September 10th 2008 Griffin2400 Said: 
my picture
it was good
On September 10th 2008 Aleera00 Said: 
Aleera00 Really great.
On September 9th 2008 Dragonbourne Said: 
Dragonbourne I like it
On September 9th 2008 speederspider Said: 
speederspider oh wow danny I didn't think you had it in you. Awesome emotion and honor in this one. I love it!
On September 9th 2008 m3LLyH3r01n3 Said: 
m3LLyH3r01n3 very unique contruction of ur poem. i like it =)
On September 8th 2008 LBbaby2010 Said: 
LBbaby2010 vry gd poem,vry deep,i like it
On September 8th 2008 watrgrl Said: 
watrgrl cool poem,in a weird way.i like it.