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This Halo lets me know, I'm a mistakeRate this Poem
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This Brutal Halo
I lead myself into believing things
Things that never seam to bring
a cure from this painful sting
I wear this burning halo
and its burden follows me wherever I go
I wear this brutal halo
how to get rid of it, i do not know
So hold me when I'm knocked down
Down on this cold desolate ground
And promise, you will always stay around
Because I wear this broken halo
And it reminds me I've done wrong
I wear this biding halo
And now I must stay strong
For I turned my back, and I must be alone
So alone, no place to call home
There's no helping me, its been writen in stone
I hate this mutilating halo
It's a reminder that I'm a mistake
Get rid of this halo
Because with it, I know I'm fake
| On June 16th 2007 derXluftbar Said : | |
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I loved it! You have so much potental! |
| On May 22nd 2007 101091 Said : | |
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wow... that was great. I love it. The last four lines hit home for me. Well said. |
| On May 9th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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WOW..amazing poem..♥ it! |
| On April 18th 2007 dureall Said : | |
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Cool poem here. I can relate to this. I know so many people wearing this "halo" |


