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Undying love

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What I feel for you

Views (81) Love Created on 7-17-07 Flag

What I fear I can no longer hide. What I taste Is yet in sight.

What I say may cause u to go away. What I do is hurt you.

How I deal with this pain. Will it go away someday.

Must I keep hurting you or do I try something new.

Please help me to find the answer so that maybe I can become better.

I just feel so angry in side. I feel I can no longer hide.

What will I do but I must go confront you. So I will go on my way

and save this story for another day.                                                          

Don't worry about me I promise to be close but if I don't return

I will be alright.

Because How I feel for you is undying love.

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On July 24th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said :
wannabetimthe1 i love it....
On July 23rd 2007 Jeremy062902 Said :
Jeremy062902 Sounds like you were soul searching for an answer in this. It was an interesting thought.
On July 20th 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 great writing..I love it
On July 17th 2007 cryajjojo Said :
cryajjojo i like this it is very expressive.
On July 17th 2007 cuteness66 Said :
cuteness66 I hope you can relate to this in your own way.. Please leave comments it is greatly appreciated.