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everyone has to have let someone go

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Letting go of U

Views (113) Other Created on 6-29-07 Flag
From the start we fell apart. I wanted your shoulder to lean on. Without you in my life is what i missed, Your lips are wat I longed to kiss. Your hand is wat I wanted to hold when I was sad,Instead you were the one to make me mad. My thoughts of you never fade but my love for u has gone away. Sometimes I wished you had stayed,and I was the one who paid. You and her were like dove birds with those 3 simple words. So I left you and you continued on and now I sing this sad song, hoping someone will come along and bring me mine...
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On July 24th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said :
wannabetimthe1 its a good poem but i would be easier to read going down instead of just a paragraph
On July 17th 2007 crazkoala Said :
crazkoala that was stunning! so beautiful! you can write girl =)
On June 29th 2007 Sexmachine6 Said :
Sexmachine6 its purdy, probably should have set it up going down ways...easyier to read
On June 29th 2007 Kaglan Said :
Kaglan aww wow this is beautiful
On June 29th 2007 Kaglan Said :
Kaglan aww wow this is beautiful
On June 29th 2007 babycrzzy Said :
babycrzzy yep i realate to it it's wonderful
On June 29th 2007 cloud132475860 Said :
cloud132475860 hmm this was a lil confuing so your the one wanting to get hurt?i dont get it im lost
On June 29th 2007 cuteness66 Said :
cuteness66 Its a poem I feel every one can relate to at one time or another..