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THE TRUTH |
Promises
You said you would be there, and you didn't show.
You said you would take me, you said we could go.
You didn't come and I was all alone.
You promised you would come back instead you went and packed.
You said you would never leave me, your promise is what I kept.
And when you left I wept. From this world you went and your
Promise is what you took. You didn't even care to look.
So I went to where you were burried, hoping that if I hurried,
You wouldn't leave me, But up and gone you went taking
everything including my broken heart. I new from the start that when
you die I would cry. Now I am a few years older and I know you
will Keep your promise. Because you said you'd wait for me in heaven
always and forever no matter what always and forever.
| On April 14th 2008 jessiepoo829 Said : | |
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this is wonderful. i love it nice meaning and the last line really took me to surprise overall it astonishing :) plaese check out my new ones..thanks |
| On July 24th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said : | |
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great poem.....nice job |
| On July 17th 2007 crazkoala Said : | |
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love the last line. =) its like youre reassuring yourself and the reader. outstanding. =) |
| On July 16th 2007 FruitPunch15 Said : | |
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nice i love it |
| On July 2nd 2007 softballdemon Said : | |
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I agree with the first comment. It's an amazing poem. |
| On June 28th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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Really Great Poem! |
| On June 27th 2007 guitardemon89 Said : | |
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that hurts and i kno because ive been there recently not with a girlfriend but with a brother and time will only tell if u forgive that person for what they did |
| On June 15th 2007 thenewguy8t88 Said : | |
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but i am no angel myself i have broken my pormises once or twice...... |
| On June 15th 2007 thenewguy8t88 Said : | |
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yeah people do that to me all the time |
| On June 15th 2007 Aaquaian Said : | |
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Great work you have here. |
| On June 15th 2007 BlkWingDragon Said : | |
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I agree |
| On June 15th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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WOW I love it!!! great job, you need more votes! it's make me angry that great poems like is gets slipped through the cracks.... check out mine :) |


