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Promises

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You said you would be there, and you didn't show.

You said you would take me, you said we could go.

You didn't come and I was all alone.

You promised you would come back instead you went and packed.

You said you would never leave me, your promise is what I kept.

And when you left I wept. From this world you went and your

Promise is what you took. You didn't even care to look.

So I went to where you were burried, hoping that if I hurried,

You wouldn't leave me, But up and gone you went taking

everything including my broken heart. I new from the start that when

you die I would cry. Now I am a few years older and I know you

will Keep your promise. Because you said you'd wait for me in heaven

always and forever no matter what always and forever.

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On April 14th 2008 jessiepoo829 Said :
jessiepoo829 this is wonderful. i love it nice meaning and the last line really took me to surprise overall it astonishing :) plaese check out my new ones..thanks
On July 24th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said :
wannabetimthe1 great poem.....nice job
On July 17th 2007 crazkoala Said :
crazkoala love the last line. =) its like youre reassuring yourself and the reader. outstanding. =)
On July 16th 2007 FruitPunch15 Said :
FruitPunch15 nice i love it
On July 2nd 2007 softballdemon Said :
softballdemon I agree with the first comment. It's an amazing poem.
On June 28th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 Really Great Poem!
On June 27th 2007 guitardemon89 Said :
guitardemon89 that hurts and i kno because ive been there recently not with a girlfriend but with a brother and time will only tell if u forgive that person for what they did
On June 15th 2007 thenewguy8t88 Said :
thenewguy8t88 but i am no angel myself i have broken my pormises once or twice......
On June 15th 2007 thenewguy8t88 Said :
thenewguy8t88 yeah people do that to me all the time
On June 15th 2007 Aaquaian Said :
Aaquaian Great work you have here.
On June 15th 2007 BlkWingDragon Said :
BlkWingDragon I agree
On June 15th 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz WOW I love it!!! great job, you need more votes! it's make me angry that great poems like is gets slipped through the cracks.... check out mine :)