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TRuth about Girls and GUys.. |
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THE TRUTH |
TRuth about Girls and GUys..
The truth about girls is that they are conceited in every way...
the truth about guys is that they are to stuborn to notice...
The truth about girls is that they are backstabbing liars to there friends.
The truth about guys is that they are the same way in the end.
The truth about girls is that they just want to have fun.
The truth about guys is they just want girls in there bed.
You see the truth never ends the guy says suck my dick and
the girl says i rather die... But don't be mad because its just my
opinion and its only the truth if you make it that way..
| On February 26th 2008 janisa92 Said : | |
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awesome cuz its so true n good writin i like ur style |
| On July 24th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said : | |
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its great......it reminds me of school.....great feeling |
| On July 12th 2007 5ur3L33 Said : | |
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I think you did a wonderful job ecpressing yourself. Thankfully we are free to do so. As I read it, I was wondering how you would close it. I have to say I am very impressed by the last line "its only the truth if you make it that way..", that is how you make people think! |
| On June 21st 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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Yea, ummm it's ok, thats your opinion thats your right! I just happen to see it a little differentley! |
| On June 15th 2007 Aaquaian Said : | |
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Good poem; I'd say something else, but Sir BikWingDragon and Miss LadyGangsta seem to have all that covered, so I'll just say I agree with them. |
| On June 15th 2007 vwmaniac Said : | |
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owch your grouping all guys together like we act that way but you don't know everyone and can't judge averyone so stick to the names of the people that pissed you off in the first place =D
you'll offend less people that way. |
| On June 15th 2007 thenewguy8t88 Said : | |
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yup this is how i see most of the world and u may have inspeired me to wirte a new one myslef |
| On June 15th 2007 BlkWingDragon Said : | |
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It only shows the truth without all the candy-coated bullshit |
| On June 15th 2007 LadyGangsta Said : | |
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Whether your trying to insult people or not, I don't see it, I see what it was like when I went to highschool, and that's all it is! Very impressed with how bluntly you put it out there and yet still had the same intense feeling, that usually doesn't happen with poets, If they say it bluntly it sounds absurd, but you've found a way to do it with meaning, kudos and keep up the good job! When you get the chance I write too, please feel free to read them! I love constructive criticism! I RATE UP!!!! |
| On June 14th 2007 Jush Said : | |
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very true. good job. |
| On June 14th 2007 milolover36 Said : | |
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Wow... that is sooooooo true!!! Good Job. |
| On June 14th 2007 cuteness66 Said : | |
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it puts girls and guys down.. read it.. |


