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Suicide
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Created on 6-11-07
This is my suicide.. You said you would be there for me to love me and care for me. You told me everything will be okay. Don't worry I am on my way. You never showed and you left me all alone. To die there on my own. You told me the blade was sharp and you let me play the part. SO I did what you said and hoped not to be dead. Instead I continued to stick the blade in me hoping you would stay with me. Which you didn't and now your gone. I don't feel pain any more because i am dead to you forever more. This is my suicide...
Please Login to post comments| On July 24th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said : | |
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its a good poem.....sad....but good |
| On July 19th 2007 jessiepoo829 Said : | |
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IT WAS GOOD!! I LIKED IT!! |
| On July 13th 2007 NickCamp Said : | |
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another one i know |
| On July 2nd 2007 softballdemon Said : | |
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that's really well written. I love it!! |
| On July 1st 2007 massofwebs Said : | |
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kl nd intersting seems 2 be popular topic on here |
| On June 29th 2007 ForsakenEmbrac Said : | |
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nice it makes me think of my poem slices and a few other peices i wrote. |
| On June 29th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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creative and great i wish i thought this way |
| On June 28th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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I know how this feels, but the way it was writtten is very creative and interesting. |
| On June 15th 2007 thenewguy8t88 Said : | |
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i think i understand what ur saying when u write this |
| On June 15th 2007 KeokiBunny Said : | |
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thats so sad. i know this feeling... |
| On June 15th 2007 BlkWingDragon Said : | |
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Sad.. |
| On June 11th 2007 cuteness66 Said : | |
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I hope you enjoy it as much as i did writing it.. |
