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Love LOnger Last Forever
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Created on 4-26-07
He tells her to hurry and get ready. She says what should I wear He says I don't care. Don't they make quite a pair.
love longer last forever
They leave for lunch with a bunch. They get into a fight but they make up at night. When they see each other the next day. Neither one have anything to say.
love longer last forever
He says I dont care for you and she says how dare you. She slaps him and hits him hard. See what you've done now our love is scared.
love longer last forever.
As they both ran to the parking lot and he saw her face shed one tear he knew she was in fear. He says oh my dear Im sorry that I lied to you and told you things that were not true. I really did fall in love with you.
Love longer last forever
Please Login to post comments| On July 24th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said : | |
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this is great.....nice style |
| On July 23rd 2007 2543 Said : | |
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i love this |
| On July 20th 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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really good ..nice imagery :) |
| On July 19th 2007 VolcomGirlSk8 Said : | |
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its ok |
| On July 12th 2007 5ur3L33 Said : | |
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I want to start by saying the poem itself is amazing! Sadly this is a poem that I all too familiar to me. I pray that this is not something the author is going through. But if it is, I want to say, true love is joy, peace, warm tingles. Love isn't meant to be continual anger, pain, unhappiness. |
| On July 7th 2007 iheartmyrp Said : | |
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I agree with the many before me. it IS a bit different in style, but i think that makes it very unique, and it works out well. Its a very cute poem! I liked it. =) |
| On June 28th 2007 firerocket67 Said : | |
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that is absolutely amazing! I love it, and you shuold really expand your poetry talents and find out how far you can go! comment on mine...i have a few, I'm going to check out your other ones now. AWESOME, AMAZING,TALENTED work!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On June 25th 2007 Gabbie9737710 Said : | |
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i really like this one
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| On June 24th 2007 darkmatters Said : | |
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I thought it was Let Love Last Longer. what you is cool though |
| On June 15th 2007 thenewguy8t88 Said : | |
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awsome stuff :) |
| On June 15th 2007 kassidy21 Said : | |
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i love it |
| On June 15th 2007 undiie Said : | |
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I've never seen a poem like that. Its good. |
| On June 15th 2007 BlkWingDragon Said : | |
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I like th unique style |
| On June 15th 2007 Amers123456 Said : | |
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I love this one it so true and good |
| On June 12th 2007 Yanks19 Said : | |
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its good i like it |
| On May 5th 2007 jewells716 Said : | |
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it's true this poem is different in it's style but it is really good. great work. |
| On April 27th 2007 shiloh666 Said : | |
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this poem is different in its own was but yet amazing, i love the style and the word choice |
