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what happens whensome one you love dies?
You called me on your phone we were dating of coarse. You said you love me and you asked me if I thought the same. I told you I would love you forever even if one of us died I would still love him. He said "let's see if what you are saying is true. Let's see if you will really love me forever. Come over to my house I have a surprize for you......" Thoughts running through my head, is he so depressed that he thinks I wouldn't love him even if he dies....IS HE SAYING HE IS GOING TO KILL HIMSELF?! Why?! Why, would he want to leave me forever? Going as quickly as I could I ran to the phone and called Lisa my friend. "Lisa, i think my boy friend wants to kill himself!" "what?! WHY?!" I told lisa the story."You should go over there if you think he is going to kill himself!" " You are right Lisa maybe I could stop him." I rushed over to David's house and I jumped out of my door, and slammed on his front door. "DAVID! PLEASE OPEN THIS DOOR!" Oh no! What if he died already? What if he never opens the door to give me a kiss? What if, what if......"Hey you are here!" "DAVID!"I yelled as I ran to give him a kiss. "David I thought you killed your self!" Nope I think I am alive." "well...." "well what?" " you said you had a surprize......where is it?" "Right here...." He pulled out a little black box out of his pocket and opened it "Will you marry me?" I looked at the ring it was so beautiful! "YES! I do! David I will be with you till the end." " good" They later got married at the bahamas And had 2 kids as they grew older their love only grew stronger untill one day when they were old and they were grandparents now they were now dying. when They both died they died together in one another's arms. "I.....love.....you...." were there last words together. They are now in heaven still together,still strong.
| On September 25th 2007 cutekitti123 Said : | |
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lol! I was sad that day.....THIS STORY IS FICTIONAL OF COARSE!!!!!!!!!! |


