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Created on 1-24-07
you own a place
within my heart
youve had that place
from the very start
it beats so fast
when im with you
and weeps and cries
when im without you
you alleviate my pains
and dry my tears
you make me feel special
and eliminate my fears
like the sun
you shine so bright
you burn me inside
through sense of sight
your eyes, they pierce
my heart and soul
my thoughts endearing
its you that i extol
my dearest love
dont forget this part
its not me talking
its my passionate heart
my desire for you
is like no other
its unique and extraordinary
a feeling that smothers
i care about you deeply
more than anything else
youre the originator and creator
of all that ive felt
i put my faith in you
with all my trust
i will never hurt you
believe me, you must
im honest when i say it
and i will say it forever
youre my one and only
hurt you? i could never
within my heart
youve had that place
from the very start
it beats so fast
when im with you
and weeps and cries
when im without you
you alleviate my pains
and dry my tears
you make me feel special
and eliminate my fears
like the sun
you shine so bright
you burn me inside
through sense of sight
your eyes, they pierce
my heart and soul
my thoughts endearing
its you that i extol
my dearest love
dont forget this part
its not me talking
its my passionate heart
my desire for you
is like no other
its unique and extraordinary
a feeling that smothers
i care about you deeply
more than anything else
youre the originator and creator
of all that ive felt
i put my faith in you
with all my trust
i will never hurt you
believe me, you must
im honest when i say it
and i will say it forever
youre my one and only
hurt you? i could never
Please Login to post comments| On August 1st 2007 alliedanielle5 Said : | |
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awww so cute! love it |
| On January 27th 2007 qweenbitch Said : | |
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aww thats so sweet whod you rite it 4? lol your a great poet |
| On January 26th 2007 rellcinko Said : | |
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i like this poem it has sooo much meaning |
| On January 25th 2007 deadpoet Said : | |
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that was written perfectly. |
| On January 24th 2007 casamar Said : | |
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aaawwww thats a really good poem!!!!=D |
