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Left In Wonder
ripped torn shattered and bruised
all of these seemingly forms of abuse
bring me back to reality as im being shot out
of the sky where i was searching for payout
i lay on the ground staring up into mid-air
waiting on a sign of some sort from somewhere
the ground in which i was laying is becoming my tomb
of thoughts, and now i wish to leave the room
but home is nowhere, not a place for comfort
its a ruin of hate with no mercy of effort
all of these seemingly forms of abuse
bring me back to reality as im being shot out
of the sky where i was searching for payout
i lay on the ground staring up into mid-air
waiting on a sign of some sort from somewhere
the ground in which i was laying is becoming my tomb
of thoughts, and now i wish to leave the room
but home is nowhere, not a place for comfort
its a ruin of hate with no mercy of effort
| On January 25th 2007 deadpoet Said : | |
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that was good, again well written |
| On December 26th 2006 hollielewlove Said : | |
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thats good |
| On December 25th 2006 destinymorgan Said : | |
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this is really good...what inspires you to write? |


