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Redemption

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Hope returned, heart restored
Baby, I'm ready for anything, so gimme your best shot
Cuz nothing can get me down in my content
I'm plain and simply put "redempt"

u were pretty much everything i wanted
but then u stomped all over my spirit
from an all time low to an all time high
i overcame myself with one glance into her eyes

a connection so great, i froze in time
staring into the depths of her eyes
a feeling of a lifetime took me over
i wanted so much to just talk to her

too shy, too scared, i watched her leave
left in wonder of what ifs and why nots
it was only a short time before i saw her again
but i let the chance float away like wind

half a year passed by without a single sighting
i was worried i'd never find her, my epitome of happiness
but all my worries disappeared when she reappeared
i had all intentions of going for it, but i veered

gone again, i regretted all over
why am i so stupid to let go of something this powerful
i found her once again in the most peculiar way
now i can talk to her on any given day

Hope returned, heart restored
Baby, I'm ready for anything, so gimme your best shot
Cuz nothing can get me down in my content
I'm plain and simply put "redempt"
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On April 28th 2008 ben1yo2 Said :
my picture
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On July 14th 2007 19dudett92 Said :
19dudett92 Yeah, I like it, your a good writer. But when you write, are you writeing about your self, or are you just polling stuff out your ass?
On January 26th 2007 Kezia31 Said :
Kezia31 i love this.
On January 25th 2007 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet that was BEAUTIFUL
On November 23rd 2006 curtissheets28 Said :
curtissheets28 if u like it, tell me........if not, tell me