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Created on 9-24-07
pain sits in the darkness
robed in broken hearts
cutting heartstrings with hands deviod of mercy
fear cowers in the corner
clothed in shudders
hiding and moaning in his name
hate hides behind darkened eyes
reveling in his nature
waiting till the time is right
love stands on the threshold
whispers stirring a velvet dress
waiting shyly to emerge
Please Login to post comments| On September 24th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Wow, I love this! I like that you end on a positive and peaceful note... |
| On September 24th 2007 run4w4ytr4in Said : | |
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Very good, paints an interesting picture |
| On September 24th 2007 XtranquillityX Said : | |
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I love this! |
