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this happend to me....this is so true

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This is how god works

Views (183) Passion Created on 4-15-07 Flag

They say if you are down that you can be turned
around.How can you be turned around feeling this down?
But its not so easy to do a 360' especially whenever
you feel just a little wheezy.
But if your like me you have to belive that lifes not
so easy when you are displeased.
God puts his arm around us to say everythings gonna
be alright, but becouse we were displeased he put us
back on our knees.
Since then...................
Now you are up on that mountain lookin at your fountain
thankin' god for all he has done becouse now you are mounted!

By Niki Lowe

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On August 2nd 2008 lovedaisy Said :
lovedaisy i second the motion
On May 14th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia i agree.
On October 16th 2007 DoYouLoveHim Said :
DoYouLoveHim so the point of the poem is that god will mount you when your displeased?...that seems inapprioate.
On April 24th 2007 dureall Said :
dureall *because* other than the misspelling and a couple other minor misshaps. This is a good write.
On April 24th 2007 frodoismyname Said :
frodoismyname that's cool!! I love it! ! great ryme!! !plus i love God so... i have felt like this...Rock on! :)