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Views (361) Respect Created on 4-22-07 Flag
  • This strange reality leaves me here to question who I really am, as I impose my thoughts on to a web of empty faces.
 
  • Spiders expose themselves from the darkness, inspecting the mental meal left for them to devour.
 
  • Many lose interest, unwilling to dissect this hearty offering; still others remain engaged and begin their journey closer.
 
  • These capsules of information provide new knowledge into my existence and the curious research the extent of my being.
 
  • As they ingest my essence I become a part of them, demanding their attention as our excretions expect more from one another.
 
  • Ensnared in this give and take relationship, we acquire new methods of survival, adapting them to our own lives as we see fit.

 

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On July 9th 2007 angelalone Said :
angelalone i like how you used the colors to spell out the other message/s.pretty interesting.thumbs up.
On July 5th 2007 PoeticPang Said :
PoeticPang woah,,,, nice structure,, i like ur use of the diff colors dropped in here and there,, if i can make out what the colors say,, lol,, ::: BLUE "a spider is what you are." GREEN "and i'm nothing but a host."........ lol,,, woah,, owow,,, awsomeness,, dang,,, makes me so craxy,, lol,, loopy messages mixed in,, that's ,, hahahaaa,, psychadellic,, ... 'mazing poem,, tho i prefer the hidden message inside it better,,, ^___^~~~~~~Pang
On April 27th 2007 Purp7eFi7th Said :
Purp7eFi7th i love this : )
On April 23rd 2007 joguff1977 Said :
joguff1977 Wow this one is good.
On April 23rd 2007 KathLoOnie Said :
KathLoOnie holy crap. .... holy.. crap. That's .. awsome.. that made me tingle. I'm sorry I missed it. I'm such a fool. Fuckin great..
On April 23rd 2007 crotchrotwedgy Said :
crotchrotwedgy To curve any curiousity. The blue and green letters say something. Blue first then green. It's kind of the key to the metaphor of the poem.
On April 23rd 2007 KathLoOnie Said :
KathLoOnie I love it, don't really understand what's withthe letter highlighting.
On April 22nd 2007 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth this is crazy and sureal, you do great work!!!!!!!!!
On April 22nd 2007 lyssabean72792 Said :
lyssabean72792 cool poem..very deep and meaningful.
On April 22nd 2007 sunny102 Said :
sunny102 Love it...:)
On April 22nd 2007 marlana79 Said :
marlana79 I love it!
On April 22nd 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg Wow, definately interesting way to put it....nice
On April 22nd 2007 lestatinator Said :
lestatinator OOOOOO, ITS FUCKING ROCKIN ASSSSSSS!!! I LUV HOW YOU WORDEDEDEDEDED IT!!!! AND THE GREEN BLUE THING, FREAKIN SCHWEET IDEAS!!!! laterz homie
On April 22nd 2007 jewells716 Said :
jewells716 oh i like it i like it i like it! i is a spider! woot! makes me smile :) it's really good despite my silliness this morning sorry about that. it is awesome. YOU ROCK!
On April 22nd 2007 sarh92 Said :
sarh92 That was a really kool poem it has alot of meaning in it ^_^
On April 22nd 2007 imbored9909 Said :
imbored9909 i like this one, its good