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Inner demons released in frustration.Rate this Poem
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Before You Take That Leap |
The Mind of an Abuser
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Created on 4-14-07
Venom spewed in arrogance
while cut throat deep pain rises
the sting released, unchained a beast
to quick to halt surprises
Toxic burn has seared the heart
she's stopped now stationary
frozen fear anxiety
where love and hatred marry
Salty wet, choked vision blurred
escape, the coming struggle
whimpered cry now audible
as an outstretched piercing vowel
His fears high surfaced, contemplates
now questions what he's done
this arm extends false remedy
as she begins to run
Nurtured rage, engrained frustration
oh why did it begin?
loved conditional, faith pretend
scars deep inside of him
She's bound for distanced solitude
screams "get away from me"
breath runs short, she knows he's not
that man he used to be
Temper retreated, his mind rewound
negative press of might
progress made, once tight connection
abandoned here this night
Please Login to post comments| On April 16th 2007 lestatinator Said : | |
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fucking wow. thats fucking kick ass. fucking genious. notice how i keep saying fucking. dude, im addicted to the word, and now addicted to ur poetry. i luv how u seperate the ppl with the colors, it definitly adds something extra. ITS FUCKING ROCKING ASS!!! yes, now i feel better. |
| On April 16th 2007 EXODUSgirl Said : | |
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thats really powerful... ive never cried while reading a poem before, but that poem made me remember, made me really feel what you were saying... keep writing... you have a talent. |
| On April 16th 2007 crotchrotwedgy Said : | |
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if you guys liked "The Mind of an Abuser" or "Momma, why...me?" I think you might like some of my other poems. "This Ride" "Horizon" & "Escape" for example. These were all done c. 2003 when I was about 20yo. They seem to have quite abit more "fight" in them than the first two peices I listed above.......Tell me what you think, and thanks for the love......I do appreciate it! |
| On April 16th 2007 v3nusfly Said : | |
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You know I cried...I was in awe...it shoved me into a closet with skeletons. |
| On April 15th 2007 paintshoppro Said : | |
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wow, i thought it was going to be about how he hit her and how he felt empowered doing it..but its not...its about how he feels slightly confused about what he's done..very nice.
i like how you put the different stanzas in different colors...and that the red force me to think of anger, and blue of tears and sadness.just a thought..
i love it |
| On April 14th 2007 lyssabean72792 Said : | |
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this is amazing and beautiful, but also sad. it really makes you think. i'm very grateful that i've never had to go through any of this. i hope you haven't either. but from the true anger radiating from this piece of work, i think you probably have. and i'm sorry. |
| On April 14th 2007 hottiebabe74 Said : | |
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wow that was amasing ur relly good
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| On April 14th 2007 marlana79 Said : | |
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That is a freaking awsome poem. I love it. You are awsome! |
| On April 14th 2007 katiemaubach Said : | |
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I love this poem, it's really deep and beautiful, but also heartwrenching. |
| On April 14th 2007 Beba321 Said : | |
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Beauty flows within this verse as if it were a simple melody... Almost leaving me speehless, a victim to it's profound meaning... Brilliant |
| On April 14th 2007 knowlyfe Said : | |
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wow. thats amazing. |
| On April 14th 2007 KathLoOnie Said : | |
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I love the last verse. I love it. I can relate in some ways. Thank you. . 8] |
| On April 14th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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.... Wow, nice job. I really enjoyed reading that. |
| On April 14th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Wow, that is some anger. Better to put it in words. |
