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Horizon

Views (184) Worry Created on 4-11-07 Flag

Help me my mind is worn

Help me get away from this storm

I'm torn

Seen too much for my mind to mourn

What's going on

Just want to be gone

 

HORIZON

And if I could leave

I would never come back

Just knowing that

I had the wind on my back

And if I could see

Everything I could have

It would break my mind

Just knowing that

That if I could leave

I would never come back

Just knowing that

I had the wind on my back

And if I could re

Breathe every breath that I've had

I would only change

This life I've led

 

 

Just let me see over the ridge

That's all I've ever wanted to do

All I want is escape

If I could allow me to

But I don't know were to go

But I know I'd be more than happy to get there

Cause all time seems to show

Is why I don't want to stay here

 

Just let me getaway

From this town

From these people

From this hate

Of the ground I walk upon

Sick and tired of being down

Every time I see this place

Same old look on the face

Of every man I come across

I'm to strange

My minds a loss

 

But let me tell you this

I'm really getting sick of it

All this fucking hiss and tiss

I don't even give a shit

 

It's like the war between

The Capulets' and Montague's

And I don't have the time to choose

the side or weapon I should use

 

what the hell should I do

I've got nothing here left to lose

But I'm scared I'm gonna fail at whatever I'm trying to prove

Or how you spin it, or defin it

No life and no one in it

No troops to represent it

I'm scorn and it's definite

 

Please don't help me

Because I'm not trying to make it to the sun

Just need to focus my eyes

On the way

To my HORIZON

And if I could leave

I would never come back

Just knowing that

I had the wind on my back

And if I could see

Everything I could have

It would break my mind

Just knowing that

That if I could leave

I would never come back

Just knowing that

I had the wind on my back

And if I could re

Breathe every breath that I've had

I would only change

This life I've led

 

 

This is what I'm going through

This is what I see

This ain't what I want

And this ain't really where I need to be

But all these mother fuckers

Keep bringing me down hard

Trying to play the perfect hand

But keep laying the wrong cards

And I can't escape

Feel like I'm chained to the ground

Try to make a break for freedom

But I'm taunted my sounds

And the voices they produce

Won't stop putting me down

I sit and watch my path darken

Every time I look around

What's going on

Why can't I leave

My minds so strong

This place has so much to offer

But for me it's all wrong

So let it go

Cause that's the only answer I could find

The stop and rewind

Only triggers traps in my mind

And the lies

From every fucker I've ever known

I don't want to home

Cause torture is the lord on the thrown

On my own

Is were I want to be

Never do I want to see

These fake ass mother fuckers keep bringing this hate up out of me

 

 

An odyssey of pain

Won't stop pushing me to the gun

Just need to stop and think

And find a way

To my HORIZON

And if I could leave

I would never come back

Just knowing that

I had the wind on my back and if I could see

Everything I could have

It would break my mind

Just knowing that

That if I could leave

I would never come back

Just knowing that I had the wind on my back

And if I could re

Breathe every breath that I've had

I would only change

This life I've led

 

 

The only choice I've been given

Is to make it on my own

But what the fuck am I supposed to do

Just leave this hate at home

Hell no, I'll bring it to the world

And show these fuckers where I'm coming from

I'll prove to them that I can make it

No matter what high I'm on

Finally I see the horizon growing in my eyes

I see the pain and anguish of a million people staring at my prize

I've found what I've been looking for

Just got to let it run

Just need to know

That one day I'll see

My HORIZON

And if I could leave

I would never come back

Just knowing that

I had the wind on my back

And if I could see

Everything I could have

It would break my mind

Just knowing that

That if I could leave I would never come back

Just knowing that

I had the wind on my back

And if I could re

Breathe every breath that I've had

I would only change

This life I've led

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On July 5th 2007 PoeticPang Said :
PoeticPang besides a few mispelled words and obscurred thoughts,,,, the structure is very superb,,, it sort of reads like a journal or diary,,,, tho the few repeated lines would do good in a song,,, it's best as a poem ,,, it has a profound voice that isn't exaclty about ranting or complaining,, just,,, stating the facts and getting things out and not asking for help on these obstacles.... alot of regrets,,,, LOTS,,,,, and LOTS,,, it has great depth in ones own perspective and overall,, i'd say,,, it's a pretty catchy poem... the length makes it more meaningful and the reptitions in some lines just pulls the whole poem together,,, very good,,, great infact,,, great job!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang
On April 26th 2007 jewells716 Said :
jewells716 this.... is awesome. *applauds* WOOT WOOT! :D
On April 16th 2007 lyssabean72792 Said :
lyssabean72792 very well written. u should turn it into a song for sure! but i agree with paintshoppro, the point is a little harder to understand..but i still like it a lot. :D
On April 16th 2007 paintshoppro Said :
paintshoppro i actually like the other one better, because of the feeling captured in it. this one is a lil harder to relate to...because the point is a bit obscured..but i could definitely see it as a song id listen to :)
On April 16th 2007 dureall Said :
dureall Schweet!
On April 16th 2007 LoralDojo Said :
LoralDojo yeah i like this one much better