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VentingRate this Poem
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Dense |
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Escape |
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Hate the Fakes |
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Horizon |
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This Bridge |
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This Ride |
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Godly Thoughts |
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I'll understand why. |
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An Urging Prayer in Poetry |
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The Mind of an Abuser |
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Momma, why...me? |
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EXPLODE |
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Spider WWW.eb |
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Recieve Me |
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Before You Take That Leap |
Dense
I like
Sex, drugs, rock & roll
To lose control
The fold for fold
To indulge the lost soul.
But what ever happened to the consequences
Seems to be too many fences
I don't give a fuck
I cut the brakes
I'm breaking through
Without pretences
Defenses
The rush engulfing all the senses
Your offensive convalescence
Offending only the dense
Is this your way of life
Or do you just lack the common sense
To see that you're a little minnow in this sea so immense
But it's you
Do you see who
That you do
Step up to
But still you choose
Even though the odds are way the fuck against you
You're gonna die
But if you survive
Over the past time
You'll lose your minds eye
So mother fucker cry
Cause I'm not gonna let you hack in
Or allow you to come back in
The fact that you got caught slackin
Should let catch on to the fact and
It's this
You're gonna get tossed in the abyss
And the only thought that you will have
Is to reminisce
| On July 5th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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hmmmm,, wow,, it is a rant,,, geesh,,, very harsh,, i feel bad for the person who this is meant for,,, ,,,, altho i wasn't gettin the catch in the beginning,,, i'm not so sure it goes with the ending well,, or am i interpreting this wrong?.... idk,, i do that sometimes,, it's a rough one to judge on,,,, so i'll just stop,,,, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On April 19th 2007 EmilyAngora Said : | |
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HEy this i a really good poem I likes it..lol man Im going to have fun tommoro 420!!!! |
| On April 17th 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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Great job dude, your a wonderful writter! This put alot of my deepest feelings into words. FAntastic job!! |
| On April 17th 2007 lestatinator Said : | |
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OH MY FUCKING SWEET JESUS MOTHER OF MERCY!!! ok, i know its bad to see fuck and jesus in the same sentence, but dude, thats how much im luvin the poem, it fucking blowing my sox off!!! and i agree with dureall, i would actually like to see it put to music. THIS POEM IS ROCKIN FUCKIN ASS!!!! |
| On April 16th 2007 dureall Said : | |
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I could see this put to music. |


