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Dense (Mixtape)

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Created on 9-25-07

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I like sex
Drugs rock n’ roll
To loose control
The fold for fold
To indulge the lost soul
What ever happened to the consequences
Seems to be too many fences
I don’t give a fuck
I cut the breaks
Without pretenses
Defenses
This rush engulfing all the senses
Your offensive convalesces
Offending only the dense
Is this your way of life
Or do you just lack the common sense
To see that you’re a little minnow in this sea so immense
But it’s you
Do you see who
That you do
Step up to
But you still choose
Even though the odds are way the fuck against you
You took the time
To speak your mind
But now you’re at a loss
Be at some time you crossed the line
And now you’re huffing my exhaust
And you’ve been tossed with the rest
I’m the best
Here’s the test
Took your shots without the vest
Refreshed
Now feeling blessed
I’m here standing demanding the coals you’re burning my hand in
Ah – Oh Ah
It’s got me feeling so outstanding
I’m a rid’a
Blinded by the light that burns inside the
Feeling of revealing that I’m better than you lya
You ain’t got no money
You write like you get it
I’m here sav’n my pennies
I’ll be the first to admit it
I’ve dug the dirt
Slung the work
And got skill
Not to mention
The tension
Of being licensed to kill
But I’m real
Not just lacing words together cause they sound strill
You lack the talent to go big as a bomb deal
Your words as such
Will rust
No one can trust
You as a hypocrite
I’ll leave you walk’n home with a crutch
Now you’re hugging your momma
Wishing you didn’t jump in
Thinking you should have first had been taught how to swim
I don’t
Lack the ability
To keep the people feeling me
I grant you all immunity
To free up the community
Of noise ‘n
I’m sick of all the fakers spreading poison
Boys and their toys
True funk as fake McCoys
And I’m topp’n it
Leav’n your head nodd’n when you’re rock’n it
Thought that you would hate it
But in fact it’s quite the opposite
I might be white
But I’m repp’n what I got
From the looks of me
You’d never think I’d bring it this hot
The ball’s in my court now
The hoop fell down
Leaving every battle to be fought on the ground
My words pound’n
The sound in your ears is astound’n
Freeborn with def lyrics
And no band to be found
in sight
But the right
To fight the night might
Leave my veins pump’n ‘til I get my name in the light
I’m com’n hardcore
Transcend your discourse
With a raw source
Pump like an IV
Straight
Make you cry more
I’ll be your overdose
The rush will leave you comatose
Wake to see me surf’n down the hall way
On a gurney yo
I’ll be rumble in your jugular
Rubb’n til your voice goes horse
From the force of what I’m bringing ya
I’ll bring the chemical burn
That kind that you’ll never learn to discern
Because my heat is all earned
An in enlightenment
I’ll write the script
That leaves you in a race to light a cigarette
But accidentally light the wick
And I’m igniting it
The tighter grip
The pen and pad
That notarize
The scribble blend to dribble
And get higher kid
You won’t know that it’s me
Right when you hear it
When you see that my name’s on the tract
You gonna fear it
And it’s incredible and legible
The tension will have you clenching your mandible
Trying to manage the intangible
An animal of sorts
Cohoasred to high spirits
The leery to cheery DeMi
Now hear me and all my lyrics

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On October 20th 2007 babyblue187954 Said :

	you were right. not dissapointed one bit.. it was great.. Youve got real talent

On October 9th 2007 7unicornrings Said :

	i LOVE it!!! amazing work!

On October 8th 2007 tswieberg Said :

	This is really good.

On October 8th 2007 California1516 Said :

	oh wow..nice job!! i got sucked into it! :D

On October 8th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :

	Nice James, I like it alot.

On October 8th 2007 101091 Said :

	I really like. It's a little long but it's still good. Great job.

On October 8th 2007 dark013angel Said :

	not bad, not bad...i like it, though you seem to lose the flow at some parts...and with it's length, a person reading it could lose concentration throughout it, and not really understand what's being said in the piece...i like it though +1

On October 8th 2007 necrosiss Said :

	this is great! you have a great way with words.

On October 6th 2007 DeathMetalPunk Said :

	woa this is SUPER AWESOME. But i though you were all christian and stuff?

On September 26th 2007 monkeydee22 Said :

	Good I like it. ~Vampyr~

On September 26th 2007 amanda710faith Said :

	cool. nice writing. you're my favorite =]

On September 25th 2007 amptone Said :

	Very good, got angst I do..

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