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Standing in this hall of thought

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Views (298) Worry Created on 8-21-07 Flag
  • Standing in this hall of thought
  • Torn between two doors
  • One has high and open ceilings
  • The other has no floors
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  • When peaking in they look the same
  • The way seems wide and clear
  • But I can see the pain inside
  • The one left in the rear
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  • Open ceilings keep my life
  • Focused on things on know
  • The lack of floors will
  • Leave you with another place to go
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  • The future seems so out of focus
  • Like solid objects in a glass
  • And every time the image shifts
  • I’m blinded by the past
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  •                         James De Mint 6-27-2006
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On May 3rd 2008 Nettylouise Said :
Nettylouise Makes one think
On October 20th 2007 babyblue187954 Said :
babyblue187954 i really feel this one i guess Im going through it right now its kindah hard to know when you try too block out all the hurt, some times its hard.. because shuting the door too the past isnt just forgetting the bad but the good and the lessons.. && right now i'm affriad to open a new door because i might mess that up too
On October 11th 2007 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth You are amazing.
On October 10th 2007 monkeydee22 Said :
monkeydee22 Love it ! I love the signature too :) lol well thanks for keepin me updated! ~Vampyr~
On October 9th 2007 7unicornrings Said :
7unicornrings sweet!!! wooooooot!! i love it!! ur stuff is always so awesome!! it would be great if u could keep me posted? pretty plz? *puppy dog eyes* ^_^
On October 8th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg Beautiful poem.
On October 8th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 dangggggggg nice work once again!! :)
On October 8th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 oh wow it makes you think. I love how you wrote it
On October 8th 2007 dark013angel Said :
dark013angel i like it, wonderful imagery, however it seems a little unfinished, like...it didn't really have a conclusion, very good work though, i'm impressed, however, the message behind it isn't exactly clear, or did you mean to hide it? overall good job though +1
On October 8th 2007 necrosiss Said :
necrosiss Awesome job! I love it
On September 16th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 Wow. I love it. Great job.
On September 12th 2007 alexia66 Said :
alexia66 wow that is great work ima chek ur others later :P
On August 21st 2007 DeathMetalPunk Said :
DeathMetalPunk wow this is amazing. Is James DeMint your name?