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I knew it was to good to b true
when i meet u i had a good feeling about you and as the days went on we became closer friends so i thought it was ok to tell u about me and when u got to know me well enough to see when something was wrong i told u everythang i told u how my last boyfriend f**cked up my life nad how im not getting along with my family.. i thought u where my friend.. and that friendship became to like... and i liked u a lot and i told u that i like u... then u say that u like me to..... then l8r u tell me that u like someone else after u led me on, i trusted u.. u know how f**ked my life is then u go and lie to me after everythan, i knew are friendship was to good to be true...
| On February 28th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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I agree with the other comment. Take it out of the paragraphh form. Other than that though...great job |
| On February 25th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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good story excellent writting and great emotion just need to find more a form to go with so people dont look at it and got man a pharagraph i dont want to read this ever wonder why poets start writting that whole line thing they knew people in general were lazy i think thats the only real reason more people havent read this it just looks longer than it is but thats just my opinion i have a habit at sucking at comments |


