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Written by a teenager with cancer

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Slow Dance

Slow Dance

Views (376) Passion Created on 1-29-08 Flag

Have you ever

   watched kids

 

On a merry-go-round?

 

Or listened to

   the rain

 

Slapping on the ground?

 

Ever followed a 

     butterfly's erratic flight?

 

Or gazed at the sun into the fading

night? 

 

You better slow down.

 

Don't dance so

fast.

 

Time is short.

 

The music won't

    last.

 

Do you run through each day?

 

     On the 

fly?

 

When you ask, How are you?

 

Do you hear the

reply? 

 

When the day is done

 

Do you lie in your bed

 

With the next hundred chores?

 

Running through your head?

 

You'd better slow down

  Don't dance so fast.

 

Time is short.

 

the music won't last.

 

Ever told your child,

 

We'll do it tomorrow?

Not see

   his

sorrow?

 

Ever lost touch,         Let a good friendship die,  

 

Cause you never had time

To call 

     and say, "Hi"

 

You'd better slow down.

When you run so fast to get somewhere

You

miss half the fun of getting there.

 

When you worry and hurry

through your day,

It is like an unopened

gift...

Thrown away.

 

Life is not a race.

Do take it slower

  Hear the

   music

 

Before the song is over.............

        ..................... 

...........................

 

( This poem was written by a teenage girl with cancer, she has 6 months left to live and her dying wish is to have her poem heard around the world.) 

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On February 15th 2008 poemprincess Said :
poemprincess This is really pretty!!!
On February 13th 2008 PlluvsRn2012 Said :
PlluvsRn2012 Hey Paige that is awesome and i am sorry for the girl who has cancer that is really sad and my best friend just died of lucemia. Its was sad i locked my self up for days!
On February 2nd 2008 dhmm Said :
dhmm *cry cry cry* omg this is so sad she put so much thought and time i really don't know how to put it but i love love this poem
On February 1st 2008 BaByBoOe Said :
BaByBoOe WOW! this poem really got to me. it's so beautiful!! i think the people who get mad at you for puttin this up, they will get over it. thanks for making this girls dream come true!!! its so beautiful!!
On January 31st 2008 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 There is nothing wrong with posting the poem here. Yea, people may get offended because it's not yours, but it was the wish of a dying girl. They'll live, I swear. Brilliant.
On January 31st 2008 LuvFaithHope Said :
LuvFaithHope what matters most is that this girl is getting her wish. i dont see nothing wrong with this person posting it. its a beautiful poem :)
On January 31st 2008 crazpaige Said :
crazpaige I understand where people are coming from, but I haven't been on this site that long and didn't know any better, sorry for everything and the confusion, If anyone wants me to delete this poem and have all the points taken away, just let me know and I'll do it! OK?
On January 31st 2008 AllPauls Said :
my picture
Indescribable.
On January 30th 2008 Chula252 Said :
Chula252 I think the poem itself is beautiful, and its nice that you are trying to honor her wish and I don't think that anyone has a problem with that. I think where people see a problem is that you chose to submit it in an area this site designated for original works and a tool they can use as a creative outlet. Doing this defeats the purpose of that and also limits who actually sees the poem. If you really want others to see it you should go to the chat area and create a thread about the girl’s story and the poem. That way first of all you will get it far more exposure and also avoid offending people who took their time and effort to create an original work to share with us and I think that is where the problem lies, whether you realize it or not you are entering it in competition with these artist and that is where they are upset the work does not belong to you to get credit for and again whether that was what you are looking for or not you are indeed getting credit for someone else’s work. I hope you understand that they are not trying to pick on you, but with so few sites around that actually offer something like this I can understand why people are getting offended.
On January 30th 2008 Dashtiya Said :
Dashtiya nice poem.. I feel sorry for the girl
On January 30th 2008 crazpaige Said :
crazpaige For PEOPLE out there that say I stole this poem and am getting the benifits, you wrong and heartless! I would never do that, I was just being nice and puting her poem out there,so lots of people could see it! Excuse me for being nice!!!!!! Looks like I'm not the only one that posted it somewhere else, so leave me alone and know that I had no wrong intintions!
On January 30th 2008 Snooky9e Said :
Snooky9e very good...and im so sorry for the girl with cancer...i hope she has enough time to live out her dreams...
On January 30th 2008 1GiJane Said :
1GiJane just beautiful
On January 30th 2008 mrskritter Said :
mrskritter very nice thanks for sharing
On January 30th 2008 joabizz Said :
joabizz very special, thanks for sharing...
On January 29th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said :
tyiqoqibfiobao Created By crazpaige and she is getting benifit from it sounds like copy right infringement to me
On January 29th 2008 ALynn1214 Said :
ALynn1214 AND PEOPLE... SHES NOT CLAIMING FROM WHAT I CAN NOTICE... HENCE THE ENDING... "This poem was written by a teenage girl with cancer, she has 6 months left to live and her dying wish is to have her poem heard around the world."
On January 29th 2008 ALynn1214 Said :
ALynn1214 LOVE THISSSS! CAN I PUT IT AS A BLOG ON MY MYSPACE? MY FRIENDS LOVE BLOGS AND POEMS!
On January 29th 2008 MonkeyLover115 Said :
MonkeyLover115 omg that is absolutely GORGEOUS!!!!!!!!!!! i don't know you're name,, but i have so much respect for you,, and support. just stay strong for as long as you can,, and don't leave ANYTHING unsaid, ok??!!!!!!!!
On January 29th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 i like it.
On January 29th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said :
tyiqoqibfiobao but wait if u didnt write it thats plagierism i mean dont get me wrong its good and sad and all but if u didnt write it isnt posting it here and claiming its yours is like the worst thing i can think of
On January 29th 2008 koolusername Said :
koolusername My friend found this poem and put it on her myspace sometime last year. Don't be so heartless as to use an excuse like that to get a poem that you found on the internet read.
On January 29th 2008 InvisibleFlame Said :
InvisibleFlame Beautiful.
On January 29th 2008 LizWinker93 Said :
LizWinker93 i've heard this poem before. its on my profile
On January 29th 2008 j2asterisk Said :
j2asterisk pretty deep.