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trusting once again |
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living behind a wall |
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the two voices |
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Acid Tears |
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tender love |
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Shut Up!!! |
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after the rain |
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*The Life of Lies*
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Created on 3-19-08
It never said i'll ruin you life
It never said i'll cause strife
It never told me the pain it's cause
It never told me the amount of loss
It never told me I would lose my friends
It never told me my life would end
It never told me it was a lie
It never told me I might not survive
It promised me i'd forget my pain
It promised me no more shame
It promised me a new life
It promised me it would be alright
It promised me it'd help me cope
It promised me it'd no longer mope
It promised me brand new friends
It promised me i could start over again
What it never told me became so true
What it promised me was lies through and through
It took control in a way that can't be explained
It ruined my life I am ashamed to say
Addiction took it's toll on me
Now i'm left picking up every shattered piece
Please Login to post comments| On March 21st 2008 kesaia1029 Said : | |
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yes..awesomeness!Its very true i like it |
| On March 20th 2008 KiTiEwAzHeRe Said : | |
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thatz pretty good. |
| On March 19th 2008 craxychik Said : | |
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i don't know if i like the ending...i might eventually redo it...idk but please tell me what you think :) thnx♫ |
