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sorry for everything i did

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The day i tell you,

Is the day I die.

I told you I hated you;

But it all was a lie.

I was mean and cruel,

And you know what they say;

Bullying means love someday.

I wish you could have thought about it & asked me out before,

Cause I knew if I did,

I was gonna be out the door.

Sorry for everything I did

Hope to see you soon.

As for now im lying in my death bed,

Thinking of you!------To Khari

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On August 22nd 2007 HRHHermione Said :
HRHHermione I like this one too, it has a good flow and the theme carries well in the two-three-two line form.