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sorry for everything i did
The day i tell you,
Is the day I die.
I told you I hated you;
But it all was a lie.
I was mean and cruel,
And you know what they say;
Bullying means love someday.
I wish you could have thought about it & asked me out before,
Cause I knew if I did,
I was gonna be out the door.
Sorry for everything I did
Hope to see you soon.
As for now im lying in my death bed,
Thinking of you!------To Khari
| On August 22nd 2007 HRHHermione Said : | |
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I like this one too, it has a good flow and the theme carries well in the two-three-two line form. |


