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Dreaming about the things that make u u

Views (45) Passion Created on 6-9-08 Flag

Laying in my bed dreaming
dreaming about me
dreaming about you
dreaming about if my dreams will ever come true

Dreams are only dreams
oh how i wish they were real
just to feel the STEEL
and the feeling of the touch

Boy you just give me a RUSH!

The tension in my neck
the weakening in my knees
how can i go on?
help me oh please oh please!

I know this isnt real
but its stuck in my head
if you only knew the things i dream about,...
in my bed

I wouldnt call myself a freak
but i get down underneath the sheets
so dont think wrong about me,
cause best believe, im a lady in the streets

Dont flagtter yourself YET
cause now im getting to the best

Its not only the freak in you
its the little things you do

Like the cute lil messages in the morning you send me
and when you ask how my day had went
along with the flowers you have sent

Now you know the reasons i dream about you
every single thing you do

Yea you know its true!

Go ahead and smile cause you know you want to
you smile everytime i say something about you
you just go C00-C00!

But now that i realize
this dream is not a dream
this dream is coming true!
the only thing that is left......
is to.......
......FEEL YOU!

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On June 11th 2008 valiantvivian Said :
valiantvivian Ok? You want my opinion? Your words are too stressed. You need to loosen their meaning, not just so they rhyme but so they make sense. But other than that I sorta liked it. It was a little creepy near the middle cause it sounded like you were doing some needless to say unmentionable. Besides I think you're a little too young to realize what you're trying to say.
On June 10th 2008 nlis2kool Said :
nlis2kool Nice I luvz it
On June 10th 2008 Koraney Said :
Koraney WOW dat was so good i really really loved it plz write more like dis ur so good laci