cornnutsrcool

going through a hard time right now...

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Dream Girl

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Created on 7-14-07

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I dreamed of girl feeling lost and alone

Her eyes were empty..her heart like stone

A darkness floated beside

Her pain and hurt thought of suicide

All the lies blinded her to see

Lost in her mind, forever they will be

She hits the wall as her knuckles tear

There was no pain, she did not care

She used to feel, hurt devoured her soul like a blaze

Now she feels nothing, all her hurt was a phase

Thoughts tickeled her mind of how life once was

She longed for the care of friends and loved ones

I sat and I pondered all of lifes fears

I lay abed, my eyes filled with tears

I opened my eyes, until then I did not see

All Along....That little girl was me.

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On July 26th 2007 lisajoann88 Said :

	i love it, its so well written! can relate so much!

On July 25th 2007 cbewing Said :

	This is good. I love your phrase "Thoughts tickeled her mind". Very discriptive.

On July 20th 2007 pinocciodreams Said :

	awww, i luv this poem, i really feel for her/u.

On July 18th 2007 dyingfminside Said :

	hey that's me :/

On July 14th 2007 Hellcro Said :

	I like it, probly cause I can relate...good job.

On July 14th 2007 cornnutsrcool Said :

	as i cried myself to sleep lastnight, these words came in my mind. i know its not very well done..but its personal.