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Missing You. |
Missing You.
Feeling the outside breeze,
Puts my mind somewhat at ease.
But then the thought of your face,
Brings back my case.
The pain my heart feels,
Is almost unreal.
To be away so far,
Is tearing my world apart.
Swirling around in the memories I have,
Makes me wonder how our relationship could ever go bad.
But the feelings we share,
Can never be spared.
The way you laugh and the way you smile,
Make my world pause a while.
To picture this,
Makes everything else go amiss.
Then, when I return,
I feel my heart start to burn.
For you are not here,
No you're not even near.
But together again we'll be,
You just wait and see.
Hand and hand combined,
And forever innertwined.
| On May 16th 2007 spasm01 Said : | |
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i really like it,yet again i think you know how to write and if you dont write a lot i think u should |
| On May 13th 2007 MissSophieJ Said : | |
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Arll.. this is exactly what im going through Girll I know how ur feeling if this is real life for u.. |


