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As i cry

Views (80) Love Created on 6-24-07 Flag

As i cry

I dont know why

Im over him

But its tearin me limb from limb

Now hes with my friend

I look at all my notes to him i was gonna send

As i stare at him

My eyes are becoming dim

I cant look at them together

Tear my heart out? Id much rather

Do i even have a heart anymore

If i do its become sore

Just shut my door

Lock myself in my room

Listen to the thunder outside..Boom!

Look outside my window to see all the rain

I feel all my pain

Im hurting bad inside

Look at all the times ive tried

Ive gotten nowhere

And this whole time i couldve gotten somewhere

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On July 30th 2007 Ericnessxo Said :
Ericnessxo Awwee..♥ Keep up the good work Buddie♥
On July 21st 2007 chipmunk557 Said :
chipmunk557 You write good poems
On July 20th 2007 stics917 Said :
stics917 dude you have a lot of potential to become a great writer..this is good :]