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COWBOY AND ME written by my daughter |
HOLLOW
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Created on 7-16-07
go away as you lay there with that blank stare in your eyes everytime i look in them a part of me dies.
i feel nothing i long for only goodbyes and everythime i hear you cry for help i want to shout fucken what something AGAIN think things that will lead me to sin.
I don't want to think this way but you gave me no choice you made me this way. with your manipulative ways your abusive words. you want me to feel your misery and lead me to believe it's caused by me. you have caused your own lifes dismay you will only relize when you are bagging me to stay.
then there's those times when you want to play nice, only on the surface do i cave into your loving ways for i know they only last until your mind desires. then again your eyes will burn with fire. you can blame me for everything you'll never take responsibility for your action. i know the truth and that's all that matters. without me your life will shatter.
Please Login to post comments| On July 18th 2007 autrydennis Said : | |
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omg , you need to stay away from this guy.....he sounds no good for you , but that is just my thoughs , very good writing |
| On July 18th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said : | |
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Man you can really feel the rage! I have so walked in those shoes being blamed for everything until they want something. If this is true I hurt for ya! Well written. |
| On July 16th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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you can feel the anger, pain, and frustration in your words... the point was taken... very good... |
| On July 16th 2007 Rockstar12234 Said : | |
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wow, this reminds me of my life. this is very good.
i love it. |
