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just a poem i thought of it's okRate this Poem
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YOU |
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FEELING'S |
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FORGOTTEN LOVE |
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COWBOY AND ME written by my daughter |
Don't Be Fake
have you ever known someone who paints a picture of themselves to be warm and true?
were they always there for you when you were blue, to stand by your side till you pulled through?
did they make it seems they loved god a whole lot, if you were in danger they would take the shot.
did it seem they gave you good advice with the best intensions, when you let out all of your frustrations?
did they seem to be on your side, then you soon discover what you thought to be true was all a lie.
that person who seemed to be real is a fake, the one who took your feelings and gave it a shake.
on the surface they paint a beautiful picture, pretending to be something their not. look in the mirrior and take a good look and don't ever become that kind of person.
| On July 27th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said : | |
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This is awesome. I loved the thought. I always deal with a lot of fakes with ulterior motives so I can relate to this. |
| On July 26th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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WOW, I hope you are not talking about me :(
great Job!! |
| On July 26th 2007 acnasi Said : | |
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wow this reminds me of my now ex best friend and some other people i go to school with... |


