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Not one of my best but I like it.

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Gravity

Views (71) Respect Created on 3-22-08 Flag

Gravity

You keep me on the Ground

You keep me from fading away

You keep everything in it’s cycle

You keep me on my way

Sure you might be the cause

of some of my falls

But sometimes you redefine

the laws...

By helping me to fly

By helping me to laugh

By helping me to try

By helping me come out of this shameful rath

You help me through each day

You help me to see

That no matter what comes my way

You are my Gravity

And you are here to stay....

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On April 2nd 2008 SpiffyKnickers Said :
SpiffyKnickers close friend huh? i was thinking a parent or something, but either way, this is very sweet =]
On April 2nd 2008 blahidyblah929 Said :
blahidyblah929 good metaphor. finally an original one. i get so sick of reading cliche' after cliche' on this site (even in my own poems >_
On March 26th 2008 assumetheworst Said :
assumetheworst i agree with you, not one of yer best but i likey! :D pats for....i dont know your name :)
On March 23rd 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb I definitley like this one! Well done!
On March 22nd 2008 amshaye Said :
amshaye it's very sweet. i luv it.
On March 22nd 2008 comacozi101 Said :
comacozi101 This was for one of my very close friends. Hope yall like it.