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The rapture buried; the demise in chains

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Black and White...

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Black and White

 

 

A composition

Of the greatest idiocy

Comes into transition

To black and white debris

A terrible anthem

Dreadfully composed

The innocent condemned

And impairment exposed

A tattered reflection

Of the world today

All ardor absent

In this tearful atrocity

Black and white

Grief and calamity

Biased Judgment

All apart of the colorless misery

The rapture buried

And the demise in chains

The reminiscences bluried

And the color slain…

A vivid fiasco

Alacrity faded from sight

Joviality falls low

                         In this world of Black and white…

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On May 6th 2008 lisajoann88 Said :
lisajoann88 WOW. thats all that need be said. amazin!!!
On January 30th 2008 assumetheworst Said :
assumetheworst thats quite good i should say, great job :D
On January 29th 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 wow. well writen.
*J*
On January 29th 2008 blahidyblah929 Said :
blahidyblah929 amazing. and an awesome vocabulary- i love that about your writing!
On January 25th 2008 evildarkness13 Said :
evildarkness13 i love it, beautifully written
On January 25th 2008 Ash94leigh Said :
Ash94leigh wow I'm speechless after your poem. =0
On January 25th 2008 oceanbluebook Said :
oceanbluebook verrry good love it :) kmp on any thing else have a good one
On January 24th 2008 olchii Said :
olchii wow i love it, the detale is amazing, still try to stay away rom unessisary the's, ands, and even some of the of's
On January 24th 2008 amshaye Said :
amshaye very good. its great.
On January 24th 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb More impressive work, keep it up!
On January 24th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Amazing work, as always!
On January 24th 2008 ThisIsTheDay Said :
ThisIsTheDay Oh wow..this is pretty damn amazing..much talent, beautiful imagery..my favest on this site, I believe...-Lozer™ =3
On January 24th 2008 amptone Said :
amptone Very well written, the poems here are getting better and better, bravo!
On January 24th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth Wow.. I don't know what to say. This was extremely soulful, thanks for sharing this. I'll be thinking about it for awhile.
On January 24th 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex that's very thoughtful:]