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The Good Times Gone...
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Created on 1-12-08
The Good Times Gone....
The good times fade further away
And each step I take
leaves me in pessimistic disarray
Now beneath my own sake
Merciless acid
Poisons my veins
A life known as placid
Thrown in the rain
Devious apathy
Spins all around
Where am I going?
A place of no sound.
The good times are no more
Just simply memories fading away
A deep implore
As I'm fading day by day
Caught up in
A never ending circle
Abysmal sin
All apart of the cycle
The black roses come at me
One by one
Thorns show morosely
The petals outdone
Glimmering razorblades
Silent Tragedy
In this grave masquerade
Part of the blustery destiny
Cover up everything
The bruises and the heart
Solemn Singing
While falling apart
What's with this pride
And the hopeless jealousy?
Hope's denied
Along with the cancelled jubilee
A fading prayer
Still left in my heart
It's all I can endure
Before my essence departs
All I have left are my memories
Of what the world used to hold
And the pathetic stories
That are yet to be told.
Please Login to post comments| On January 19th 2008 oceanbluebook Said : | |
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wow.. very very good..♥ |
| On January 17th 2008 blahidyblah929 Said : | |
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whoa. the only word to describe the intensity of this poem is whoa. thankyou for that! |
| On January 15th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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I love this so much! Amazing work! Awesome word choice! |
| On January 14th 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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wow, this poem, it went smoothly and slowly, catches any readers attention, what's the right word for this poem? I can't think of it at the moment, it's a breathtaking poem, very nice! |
| On January 14th 2008 ThisIsTheDay Said : | |
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This is rather beautimous, I do believe you've outdone yourself this time...Very true, as well, well-worded...No crits..-Lozer™ |
| On January 14th 2008 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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nothing i can say expect wonderful work |
| On January 13th 2008 amshaye Said : | |
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its very good |
| On January 13th 2008 ha7 Said : | |
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Loved it, this is so great and true! Beautifully written. |
| On January 12th 2008 necrosiss Said : | |
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lovely. |
