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And we're dying as we live...

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Plastic People

Views (200) Tragedy Created on 12-6-07 Flag

In a world full of plastic people

full of dying hearts

of each fatal ripple

is yet another notorious start

Jealousy developed

as my essence slips away

Another heartbreaker

kills another dying day.

Another death burns through

Another person lost in the crowd

Another fake hero

Another long lost faith continues to shroud

Mercy's gone

Sins are too great to forgive

Faith's out of reach

And we're dying as we live

Sinister charisma

placed in us all

Our blood turned to magma

as we watch each other fall

An unread prophesy

Bearing pain and sorrow

A new fulfilling agony

In the heartbreak burrow

Because in this world of plastic people

No one really cares

So we come to a fallen steeple

A time where life is beyond unfair

Where money’s all that matters

Where pain never subsides

Where hearts continues to shatter

Where there’s no one to confide

In a world of plastic people…

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On December 12th 2007 buffduffdan Said :
buffduffdan Love it - keep it up :)
On December 10th 2007 blahidyblah929 Said :
blahidyblah929 that is amazing!
On December 7th 2007 SpiffyKnickers Said :
SpiffyKnickers deep & depressing, but the truth isn't always nice is it?
i like it a lot.
On December 7th 2007 MrKeesee Said :
MrKeesee This is really impressive work. If all of your work is this quality then keep me posted when you get something new up. ':D
On December 6th 2007 guitarmissy Said :
guitarmissy amazing.. you are really talented :)
On December 6th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Love it! Love everything about it!
On December 6th 2007 ThisIsTheDay Said :
ThisIsTheDay This is really good! I really like the flow of it and whatnot...great job!!
On December 6th 2007 necrosiss Said :
necrosiss Ööh.. I like.