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The Animal
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Created on 12-2-07
The Animal
Entering a chamber of conspiracy
Lost in the crowd
Faith swiftly departing
As helplessness is vowed
Understanding is vague
As I’m quarantined in your love
Trapped in this agonizing plague
For you’re the black dove…
I’ve fallen for a lost cause
A collision with my dreams
An arrival at a broken destiny
My inept heart screams
You are the reason
Of my unspoken lunacy
The fidelity wasted treason
Reveals the animal known as me
Please Login to post comments| On December 9th 2007 amshaye Said : | |
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thats awesome. i have 2 new poems. in love and hurt. |
| On December 3rd 2007 guitarmissy Said : | |
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awesome! its really great |
| On December 3rd 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Totally love it! Great word choice! |
| On December 2nd 2007 ThisIsTheDay Said : | |
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This is really good! I LOVE IT!! Very inspiring... Me=love this poem. xD |
| On December 2nd 2007 Kenshiko Said : | |
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It's awsome but the slanty writing makes it hard to read. I loved it though, way to go ! ^_^ |
| On December 2nd 2007 blahidyblah929 Said : | |
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just when i thought it coulodnt get better - that was truly awesome! |
| On December 2nd 2007 ALICHELLA16 Said : | |
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love it |
| On December 2nd 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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very awesome hun! keep writing! |
