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I'll Always Love you |
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No One Cares |
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In Love |
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My Life |
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To Death |
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Heartbreak Society |
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Screwed by you
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Created on 11-16-07
Burn the tears
Kill the answers
Let me fall
Murder the prayers
Define Death
Thats what happened
Steal by breath
My heart is finished
I know you don't care
thats perfectly okay
Life isn't fair
and it doesn't matter anyway
Watch me fade
My soul turn to black
My hope be forbade
My spirit attacked
My soul turned to stone
my love wasted
Hell shan't be postponed
Its already been tasted
My bloods turned to magma
and my desire to jealousy
my love to trash
and I'm no longer me.
I FELL for you
Do you understand
YOU were my everything
My life's churning sand
I was taunted by your evil
and infected with your love
Dawning on my hearts sinful retrieval
Away my heart was shoved
You played with my heart
and then threw it in the trash
And now I'm falling apart
with the devils scarlet sash
Hung by your string
Murdered by you
the dried tears sting
Now life has been screwed....
Please Login to post comments| On May 6th 2008 lisajoann88 Said : | |
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i love it, good job |
| On December 26th 2007 ThisIsTheDay Said : | |
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This is amazing, I love it! Just tighten it up a bit, that's all it really needs...grat job! -Lozer =3 |
| On December 2nd 2007 blahidyblah929 Said : | |
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another poetic feat. im so jealous! |
| On November 23rd 2007 oceanbluebook Said : | |
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that was so good.. ♥ |
| On November 18th 2007 me996644 Said : | |
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this is so good!
read my poem too!
the one who has at least 5 votes
its kinda similar to this one!
and this is an OUTSTANDING! POEM! |
| On November 18th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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Great poem, no doubt about that, keep it up! |
| On November 18th 2007 WildDream Said : | |
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I really love this! =D |
| On November 17th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Love it! I can feel the emotion! Love your style, too! |
| On November 17th 2007 ha7 Said : | |
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aww this was an amazing poem! excellent job! |
| On November 17th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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aww...i love this poem, hun! terrific job, but don't give up hope..life gets better... |
