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Just Friends
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Created on 11-3-07
Just Friends
Darkness imprisons me
As thoughts run through my head
Falling Swiftly
Disbelief at what was said
The words echoed through my mind
As another soul is murdered
The soul I’ve been trying to find
The pain continuously slurs
I knew it would happen
I knew it would be this way
Wondering if its real
Feeling nothing but my heart being ripped out today
A head on collision with reality
Crashing through my mind
Lost of all fidelity
As I leave the coals of my heart behind
So as the tears fall to hell
Showing me the end
The end of every love
The beginning of just friends…
Please Login to post comments| On November 5th 2007 countryfreak13 Said : | |
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WoW! Very well written! Just full of emotion just brings it together! |
| On November 4th 2007 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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this is, very emotional, very, just awesome |
| On November 4th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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I love your word choice! It builds up very nicely. |
| On November 4th 2007 dbgrandom Said : | |
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i like it =DD wow now its my turn to say ' i can really relate to this one..' |
| On November 4th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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aww this is really sweet..very sad, but very good. nice job hun. ^_^ |
| On November 3rd 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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plz rate and comment.... |
