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Created on 10-31-07
You walk into the room
entering his stare
evil fufills you
life isn't fair
he takes you up the stairs
there's nothing you can do
as tears fall in despair
Misery falls through
you begin to fill the pain
you scream and slaps you
depression begins to rain
The next day comes
you look upon yourself
as the painful melody hums
of broken guitar on the shelf
You walk through the crowd
as they look at you and laugh
the comments seem to get ever so loud
...........
You look into the mirror
and try to smile
but its broken from the interior
from all the pain that has piled...
Please Login to post comments| On November 5th 2007 ha7 Said : | |
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Excellent. |
| On November 5th 2007 countryfreak13 Said : | |
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Incridible work! :D |
| On November 2nd 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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wow..impressive work.. |
| On October 31st 2007 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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wow, this is so emotional i don't even know what to say |
| On October 31st 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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sorrry - its "he slaps you" |
