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Everyday u feel pain but u keep goin....

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You hear the people

yelling in your ear

telling you to go away

stabbing from the rear

They tell you you're ugly

that you aren't worth a thing

but if only they could see

the things they are doing.

Every day you go

Every day you feel pain

But you keep on going

even though your hearts been slain

You're in love with a guy

who doesn't like you back

and you have  so called friends

and its you they seem to attack

You look at the knife every day

As your head continues to spin

You're heart has been hurt in every way

the depression continues to pile

and so the cuts on your skin

But there's something you really need to know

before you go away

It's been there all along

Its what they secretly all say

You are beautiful, you're smart

You funny and unique

You have the sweetest heart

although they call you a freak

they've been jealous from the start

if only you knew

as you fall apart

the number of people that love you

You're one individual

A white dove among the black

You're absoloutely perfect

Nothing do you lack....

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On November 5th 2007 ha7 Said :
ha7 good ending!
On November 4th 2007 necrosiss Said :
necrosiss Really good.
On November 4th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic As the previous comments say, awesome job! Didn't end the way I'd expected...
On November 2nd 2007 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb Not all scars show, not all wounds heal, sometimes you can't always see the pain someone feels..Great poem, it was really good.
On October 31st 2007 evildarkness13 Said :
evildarkness13 this is tragic, tragicly beautiful