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Everyday u feel pain but u keep goin....Rate this Poem
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I'll Always Love you |
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No One Cares |
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In Love |
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Dying Inside |
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Judged |
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Suicidal Start |
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My Life |
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To Death |
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Heartbreak Society |
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You're the Reason... |
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Being myself will never be good enough |
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Lost in your eyes |
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Reasons Why |
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Summary of You and Me |
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Unknown Feeling |
Perfect...
You hear the people
yelling in your ear
telling you to go away
stabbing from the rear
They tell you you're ugly
that you aren't worth a thing
but if only they could see
the things they are doing.
Every day you go
Every day you feel pain
But you keep on going
even though your hearts been slain
You're in love with a guy
who doesn't like you back
and you have so called friends
and its you they seem to attack
You look at the knife every day
As your head continues to spin
You're heart has been hurt in every way
the depression continues to pile
and so the cuts on your skin
But there's something you really need to know
before you go away
It's been there all along
Its what they secretly all say
You are beautiful, you're smart
You funny and unique
You have the sweetest heart
although they call you a freak
they've been jealous from the start
if only you knew
as you fall apart
the number of people that love you
You're one individual
A white dove among the black
You're absoloutely perfect
Nothing do you lack....
| On November 5th 2007 ha7 Said : | |
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good ending! |
| On November 4th 2007 necrosiss Said : | |
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Really good. |
| On November 4th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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As the previous comments say, awesome job! Didn't end the way I'd expected... |
| On November 2nd 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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Not all scars show, not all wounds heal, sometimes you can't always see the pain someone feels..Great poem, it was really good. |
| On October 31st 2007 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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this is tragic, tragicly beautiful |


