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Created on 10-29-07
Silence Collapses through
I don't know what to say
All I can think about is you
and the feelings I hide away
Trapped in the moment
Lost beyond doubt
can you take the hint
that I keep hiding out?
The past is behind me
what can I say
as i'm lost conversationally
while you take my breath away
Please Login to post comments| On November 2nd 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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damn huns, your doing absolutely great with your poems. |
| On October 30th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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i love this one! i felt this once. Nice work |
| On October 29th 2007 guitarmissy Said : | |
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i love it!! its so sweet! |
| On October 29th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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I love this one! |
| On October 29th 2007 ALICHELLA16 Said : | |
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awww lol i know u wrote that one fer me right? lol j.k j.k cute |
