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Silent Suicide
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Created on 10-17-07
Silent Suicide
So I walk through the halls again
The glares pierce my back
Not one happy stare, not one friend
I’m the one everyone wants to attack
I just look at the ground
And wonder why
No one hears my crying
Another day goes by….
I stare at my palms
And look past the bloody wrists
Given up on the prayers and psalms
To hell, God seems to insist
Doesn’t matter what happens
No one cares anyway
So as my heart is slowly stopping
The pain begins to break away
I cry out to the world as loud as I can
But no one hears me
Not a single person
My heart stops slowly
Now in the darkness
I lay outside
Dead, rid of the pain and the sickness
So goes my silent suicide
Please Login to post comments| On December 2nd 2007 blahidyblah929 Said : | |
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magnificant poem! |
| On October 28th 2007 ha7 Said : | |
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This is beautiful. I love the last line especially, it brings so much flow and dept to the poem. |
| On October 24th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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wow..just..wow.. This is amazing. I've felt this many times before. I love your choice of words. I believe this is my favorite by you so far. Great job. |
| On October 19th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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Wow, this is great! |
| On October 18th 2007 jennaferz Said : | |
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wow, hun. this is awesome. its so emotional and heartfelt. |
| On October 18th 2007 hellokitty453 Said : | |
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so that is what true loneliness feels like. |
| On October 18th 2007 necrosiss Said : | |
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I lay outside
Dead, rid of the pain and the sickness
So goes my silent suicide
absolutely brilliant. |
| On October 18th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Amazing, again! You have the ability to put so much emotion into your poem! |
| On October 18th 2007 Chriistiinax Said : | |
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Wow. I love the deep emotion. I feel like that sometimes as well.
I love the quote:
To hell, God seems to insist
Doesn’t matter what happens
No one cares anyway
It's So True :] |
| On October 18th 2007 sochula777 Said : | |
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I like this one it's actually one of your best ones I think! |
| On October 17th 2007 SoccerChik45 Said : | |
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It's a very good, and deep poem.☺ |
