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MINE

MINE

Views (169) Anger Created on 12-23-07 Flag

MINE

 

By: Colten Yeigh

 

I begged you dear that you would stay

What evil made you act this way?

And since you left without a sign

I took your heart and made it mine

 

Although I chose that you would die

I could not stand to see you cry

I held you close and kept you still

The reaper came and had his fill

 

You left this world without a sound

And in the field I laid you down

Within the soil where flowers bloom

So roses would become your tomb

 

Within this final place you lie

Oblivious to passer-by

The world cannot take you away

Your debt forever you repay

 

Now our love can truly grow

A bond that no one else will know

I feel our destinies align

My life is yours, your heart is MINE

 

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On February 8th 2008 teeniegirl015 Said :
teeniegirl015 This scares me. It sounds like you killed her.
On January 20th 2008 CaPlanePourToi Said :
CaPlanePourToi Oh this is very good. Not too dark, but very good.
On January 4th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord good job!! love the feel of it.
On January 3rd 2008 HumanF17TH Said :
HumanF17TH : O .... i love this poem! its truly amazing!
On December 29th 2007 shelbydabrat Said :
shelbydabrat omg, awesome, truly great I love it keep up the good work!
On December 27th 2007 MoOnZoMbIe Said :
MoOnZoMbIe great. speechless. i wish a guy would write this for me...so, i MUST a little sick & twisted.
On December 24th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Love the emotion!
On December 24th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Oooooo spooky. Remind me not to cross you. haha. Great poem as always. You have talent.
On December 24th 2007 bambamwolf87 Said :
bambamwolf87 Sounds like a love gone wrong, but true love never dies, so it makes sense. Love goes beyond the grave. great job!
On December 23rd 2007 hottiesmnth25 Said :
hottiesmnth25 i like this one it is very deep an dark
On December 23rd 2007 perdylilpyro Said :
perdylilpyro good work- to be sure, but you can definitely tell it might be your first attempt at a poem of this nature. which (depending on your point of view) might be a good thing( a slight lack of proficiency in this arena lets us know that you don't really go around killing people :P)