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My Dirty Soul

Views (616) Pain Created on 8-6-07 Flag

By: Colten Yeigh

 

You make for me a paradise

A place you give eternal life

And for my sins you pay the price

So long ago you bore my strife

 

Yet what do I give in return?

What evil hides behind these eyes?

What forces causes my soul to burn?

What truth is found within my lies?

 

With the end of every day

The guilt reveals my wicked mind

For now my life has gone astray

The man I was is left behind

 

The tears are running down my face

To have this feeling seems so strange

And though I want to leave this place

I know that I will never change

 

The darkness came and left a hole

My life itself has torn the rest

And now it seems my dirty soul

Has died and spilled out of my chest

 

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On February 14th 2008 oz10norrid Said :
oz10norrid nice rhythm the poem practicaly reads itself
On December 23rd 2007 bambamwolf87 Said :
bambamwolf87 great job!
On November 19th 2007 slyjamma Said :
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well written man... I totally relate with you on it
On November 19th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord Deep so deep, love it!!
On September 3rd 2007 CyTvSoMl Said :
CyTvSoMl It has wonderful rhythm and flow. I really like it. You are an excellent writer. Do you write short stories?
On August 26th 2007 perdylilpyro Said :
perdylilpyro that feeling is something I could deeply relate to at least once or twice in my life
feel free to ignore me if you don't want to answer this, but I couldn't help but ask is this simply written from a certain place in your life or do you truly live feeling unforgivable? it'd be cool to be able to talk with you about it
On August 26th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said :
xxlostsoul14xx Well done, I really like this. =)
On August 10th 2007 loradoman Said :
loradoman Again good flow. You have a talent for balancing good and evil. I think that shows a bit about who you are too.
On August 8th 2007 shelbydabrat Said :
shelbydabrat very insightful, great poem, will u check out my stuff & comment on it
On August 8th 2007 poet77 Said :
poet77 captivating
On August 8th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said :
mazerthumpkin insightful, great meter
On August 7th 2007 blah2blah Said :
blah2blah Great, creative, and amazing poem. very deep.
On August 7th 2007 1i7i92 Said :
1i7i92 dude, theres allot of deep thot and heart in this, so i effin love it!!!
On August 6th 2007 emoxMCRx4ever Said :
emoxMCRx4ever Wow. That's really good. I wish I was as good as you....................Read some of mine!!!
On August 6th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic This is great! Amazing work, yet again!
On August 6th 2007 midnitemurder Said :
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really well written! i like it.
On August 6th 2007 WHOYOULOVEBABA Said :
WHOYOULOVEBABA I couldn't have said it better myself. Very good poem darlin....I love when someone is open with thier thoughts.The world does not understand.....
On August 6th 2007 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth this is very awesome, well done!
On August 6th 2007 MoOnZoMbIe Said :
MoOnZoMbIe i ♥♥♥ this...beautiful ending..nicely done!! :]
On August 6th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Fantastic. Very powerful. The final stanza blew it out of the water.
On August 6th 2007 KrystalToney Said :
KrystalToney Amazing. What creative and elusive writing. My friend u are very talented when it comes to speaking ones soul.
On August 6th 2007 numbbbb0z Said :
numbbbb0z Yeigh 8)
On August 6th 2007 corinne004 Said :
corinne004 Very, very good.
On August 6th 2007 sadee309 Said :
sadee309 wow, i like it