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Age Eternal
As the years passed by...
Only one of us has changed...
That face so smooth long ago...
Has become so withered...
But mine has remained...
Untouched by the years...
For my years are different...
For my age be eternal...
As the years passed by...
Your once childish mind has morphed...
Thy thoughts now wise yet biased...
But my mind has remained...
Innocent yet corrupt...
For my years are different...
For my age be eternal...
As the years passed by...
Your feelings matured strangely...
Into a love I could not understand...
But I could not feel as you...
Love was but a word upon my tongue...
For what could I do with one who did not have my years...
For someone whose age be uneternal...
As the years passed by...
Your life came to an end...
Thy face had smoothed with death...
Thy mind no longer clouded...
But thy heart was still mine...
Beating within these tears I had not known I possessed...
For it, I will cast away these years...
For you, I will end my age eternal...
| On August 2nd 2008 HisRedRose Said : | |
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i love this so much! very talented writer you are :) x |
| On July 2nd 2008 CRISSY10012 Said : | |
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Aww i love this it made me think of your story yet it doesnt i dont know but i still love it. |
| On July 2nd 2008 CRISSY10012 Said : | |
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Aww i love this it made me think of your story yet it doesnt i dont know but i still love it. |
| On July 2nd 2008 cokoocokies Said : | |
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um yah... something's wrong with the paragraph break so it's kinda clumped together |


