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Pretending-

Views (134) Pain Created on 12-1-06 Flag

She walks around with a plastic smile. Pretending everything is fine. She pretends her life is the best. When inside she's dying, sick of all the crap. Wanting to end her damn life. Wanting to just go away, because nobody knows, nobody could understand all she's been through. Nobody would notice she thinks in her head if I left today never to return. But she keeps that smile. Plastic, never letting her true feelings show.

Then with a gun to her head and the bite of the bullet on her mind she pulls the trigger. All she wants is one person to be there, to hold her, but there is nobody. So this is how it ends, with a pool of blood on the floor and a beautiful girl dead.

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On July 8th 2008 charon17 Said :
charon17 this is really good
On May 15th 2007 dizzycatt Said :
dizzycatt amazing. simply amazing.
On April 10th 2007 nascott01 Said :
nascott01 wow, very intense. if only more people could read this and realize what other people go through
On February 6th 2007 JenMoe Said :
JenMoe Wow. This is all too true. Depressing and sad, yet true. to quote a song I love "Are we happy plastic people, Under shiny plastic steeples. With walls around our weekness, and smiles to hide our pain?"
On January 2nd 2007 jessicagirl13 Said :
jessicagirl13 awwh that was an amazing poem ...ive felt like that tons of times.