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The Ghost-
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Created on 12-1-06
She crys alone in her own world. Her skin a ghostly reminder of her life. Thinking about the things that she once had. Thinking about the life that she lived. She crys inside never showing the tears that are streaming down her face. For if she showed those tears people would just point and laugh. She wishes that she could go face the pain that she has but she is weak. On the outside she is strong facing her fears and the people that causes those fear, on the inside she is scared, wondering what will happen to her in the days to come. She sits awake at night staring at the ceiling wondering if it will ever get better. Will I ever be happy or do I just stay in this depression? She wonders her house at night being the shell of a body. Being the ghost of the girl that everyone loved and being the girl that she is now.
Please Login to post comments| On April 14th 2007 kimberrlee14 Said : | |
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aw.thats so good!! i reeli like that!!! |
| On April 10th 2007 nascott01 Said : | |
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that strikes very close to home, but i really like it |
| On April 6th 2007 Alaskabear Said : | |
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wow, that's deep. but's it's soo good! |
| On March 26th 2007 Raiden21 Said : | |
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i love yuor work it's so deep and open you write about the main issues in life and it's extraordinary |
| On February 6th 2007 JenMoe Said : | |
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I agree with sincerlyichab. It seems the perfect summation of todays girls. Sadly enough. I have been there myself. Good work on depicting what we feel. |
| On January 3rd 2007 sincerelyichab Said : | |
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Oy! How depressing lol but fairly true it seems for a lot of girls of today, being you know, that "perfect" being, that perfect "hott" girl that every guy should just lust over. They wonder why we all have problems in getting a relationship when everything is so skin deep...very good...:) |
| On January 2nd 2007 Atir09 Said : | |
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Wow!! deep jet simple. |
